All Comments on 'Under the Counter'

by Archer2050

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Hmm!!

Can you say "Non-consent, Oral rape" she doesn't even like her friend or she wouldn't have done that when she did it. Alana was letting it happen because she was trying to get some more business for THIER company. If Alana would have stopped her then the man would have taken his business some where else..

Paul

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
oi, some people...

paul, whoever you are, you need to loosen up... it was a hot story, & far more in the "lesbian" category than the "non-consent" category! personally, i though it was a sexy scenario, i love the idea of trying not to let on that you're being brought off in a semi-public setting ;) good work...

Evil AlpacaEvil Alpacaalmost 19 years ago
Wish it was longer!

I don't see how anyone could consider this nonconsent. It was a really nice and unfortunately brief sexual encounter. I would've like to see some afterplay, but that's the only negative thing I can think to say about it.

Keep up the good work.

touchetouchealmost 19 years ago
Loved it!!!

Archer2050, this was great! Beautifully well written. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I loved it

Nonconsent my butt! They had phone sex and Alana kissed her at the end, so obviously it wasn't nonconsent. She was simply hesitant to admit that she liked her best friend like that. it's not an easy thing to admit.

Keep up the awesome work, Archer! This story made me EXPODE!

Sincerely,

a bi female from rhode island

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
MMMMMMMM

*Faints with pleasure*

_Lady1SensuaL1Fire_

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A fine cute story

Archer:

This was a fine tale. Forget Paul Anonymous. Some people forget that a) This is Literotica and b) IT'S A STORY!

It was well written. It was sexy. Finally, It was humorous. Well Done and Thank You! Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very hot!

loved the story, made me want to be standing behind the counter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice Work

Yeah that was an awesome story, if thats what your capable of, keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
hot!!

i liked this story. it was very erotic.

i was as turned on as rene

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Capping a Volcano

Finally, I found a story that was almost custom made for my liking. It's as if the author picked my brain, so erotic yet dangerously sexy and captivating. Loved it, look forward to more stories along the same vein.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Soooooo Sexyyyyyy

This is so good, I can read this over and over again and not get bored by it, very good job keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Wow

Very, very good. Thank you for this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
So Hott!!!

I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Loved it

This was so hot, sexy and dangerous, I was almost there with her - more please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Maaaaaan That was hot ... oooooooooh

well this is what i call real erotic story... really really hot with a touch of adventure to take u off the edge ... more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Soooooo Hot!!!

My nipples are still hard and my pussy is still dripping from this story....made me feel as though i was the one standing at the counter....yum

Great work, keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Fucking Hottttt!!!!!!!!

Please do another one like this one. It made me so horny and I was playing with my pussy and tits the entire time I read it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Sexy

This story was so hot and sexy, I came before the end of it. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
wow

definitely hot.. yum

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Lovely Story

Very good story. I am getting so wet. I wish I was at the counter instead of her

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!

OMG WOW!!! SOOOOOOOO HOT!

I LOVED IT!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
very exciting story

i stayed hard to the very end

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

love itt.

earthserpentearthserpentover 12 years ago

that hot. is there more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Brilliantly delicious and funny to!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Classic

I consider this story to be a Literotica classic. One of my favorites to read. Always a pleasure.

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