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On the Beach with Army Guys

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/02/05

hot

fucking hot story

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by Giraffeman07/02/05

hmmmm

Jury still out. OK but a bit sublime.

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by Anonymous07/03/05

My end to your story

Last thing she said to me really knocked me for a loop.

"Next time I'll remember to go on the pill before we come back. These Army guys may not be shooting blanks like you are honey."

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by Anonymous07/03/05

Silly and without much direction

Hmmm - much ado about what - gangbang he caused - didn't want - but joined in?? then she liked it inspite of it all?

HUH - woops - turn left - over where? Lets go downward or?

Puzzling

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by Anonymous07/03/05

ok

started out really well then as the action got going it was like the rest of the story was hurried...not a lot of detail towards the end...on the whole an ok story

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by Anonymous07/28/05

good start bad end

comment says it all

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by Anonymous08/19/05

Ending?

great fucken story but what happened to the detail at the end?

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