All Comments on 'On the Beach with Army Guys'

fucking hot story

Jury still out. OK but a bit sublime.

Last thing she said to me really knocked me for a loop.

"Next time I'll remember to go on the pill before we come back. These Army guys may not be shooting blanks like you are honey."

Hmmm - much ado about what - gangbang he caused - didn't want - but joined in?? then she liked it inspite of it all?

HUH - woops - turn left - over where? Lets go downward or?

Puzzling

started out really well then as the action got going it was like the rest of the story was hurried...not a lot of detail towards the end...on the whole an ok story

comment says it all

great fucken story but what happened to the detail at the end?

Still good for a quick read after all these years