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by Anonymous

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by Jennifer C07/03/05

This sizzles

right from the start!
Masterfully written

Nary a knuckle to unbuckle
as fingers frizzle the cloth
to put one's whole
into what it devours
even love tainted sour
to feed the need
to grasp and hold,
another.

Wonderful writing
Thanks.
~ Jenn

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by Anonymous07/03/05

I am impressed!!!!

I felt this down to the bottom of my soul Art. I feel this is one of the first "ART" poems. This is you ... and it is stunning. Thank you for allowing us in..
blessings
du~
Mentioned in the Sunday reviews

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by dcpoet4407/03/05

i wonder if....

them are brass knuckles....because i'm seeing things here that i haven't before. this piece is very reflective. this is smoothly written and with nice flow. super job art.........don

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by Anonymous07/04/05

climbing the mountains

just to see the other side...what a ride eh...great pen...love your writes as always...lol/blue

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by LeBroz08/06/05

~~

joy in another
and in the finding
confirmation
affirmation

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