Well written, and you accomplished something that most writers can not, give me a fucking Hard-On without being NASTY. It is a Five!
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Anonymous07/06/08
wow
I loved the used of the words, very erotic, was a little disappointed he couldn't hold off a little longer then a few pushes, too much foreplay for not enough true action, and agree it made me wet reading just left me wanting more.
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Well written, and you accomplished something that most writers can not, give me a fucking Hard-On without being NASTY. It is a Five!
wow
I loved the used of the words, very erotic, was a little disappointed he couldn't hold off a little longer then a few pushes, too much foreplay for not enough true action, and agree it made me wet reading just left me wanting more.
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