All Comments on 'Chance Meeting'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
omg

thats it im gonna try that at the next opportunity i get. its got me creaming. purrrrrrrrrrrrr

manwhosejsutflirtmanwhosejsutflirtalmost 19 years ago
i enjoyed the story

you did a great job writing the story. i loved it. keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
very rushed

Your profile says you love to tease, but this story was very rushed. Take your time, and also use proper puncuation with the dialogue. The way it was written was like a long drone that could have been read by the guy that used to do those Fed Ex commercials.

There was a story there, just relax and let it tell itself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
XD

LOL, haven't read humor this funny in a while! Thanks for the laughs!

tigger7769tigger7769over 13 years ago
nice

very hot more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
terrible

The worst-written story we've seen on Lit!

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