by RedHairedandFriendly
My favorite type of erotica..a sweet and romantic story that is still hot enough to get my juices flowing and make me ache to run to my lover..
Loved your story RHF. I <3 Redheads, and your story got me so excited i had to have a long cold shower to releive the swelling it induced.
Great work!
Greets from Australia,
::Asmodeu$::
Nice job of turning a brief fantasy into an exciting story, Red. I loved this one!
Woohoo...what a story and an early morning treat, if I do say so myself! Very erotic, hot and sexy...
~Honey
DC:
Another great story and a nice turn of events at the end. Ronnie W.
Too much narration; it's too dull for the eye to read. Break up your paragraphs and give more dialogue.
That way, it's easier for a browsing reader to get hooked.