All Comments on 'Hot and Ready'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sweet and steamy

My favorite type of erotica..a sweet and romantic story that is still hot enough to get my juices flowing and make me ache to run to my lover..

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice!

Loved your story RHF. I <3 Redheads, and your story got me so excited i had to have a long cold shower to releive the swelling it induced.

Great work!

Greets from Australia,

::Asmodeu$::

gotwood49gotwood49over 18 years ago
so hot!

Nice job of turning a brief fantasy into an exciting story, Red. I loved this one!

Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
RED HOT!

Woohoo...what a story and an early morning treat, if I do say so myself! Very erotic, hot and sexy...

~Honey

ChagrinedChagrinedover 18 years ago
Greatest Story I ever read

Fantastic. Best Story I ever read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I never knew you could be so horny

DC:

Another great story and a nice turn of events at the end. Ronnie W.

The_DarknessThe_Darknessover 18 years ago
Hell Yeah!

All fans should be this accomodating....nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Needs More Dialogue

Too much narration; it's too dull for the eye to read. Break up your paragraphs and give more dialogue.

That way, it's easier for a browsing reader to get hooked.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
So Hot

Gotta read more of the you stories.

Anonymous
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