All Comments on 'Hot Sis Returns to Shy Bro'

Needs a little smoothing out but very nicely done.

i can see a part 2 to it

A little bit more detail would have been nice. I can see a chapter 2 on this story. Maybe even getting to sister pregnant by the brother. The sister then loses the boyfriend? A hot little story!

Ahhh! If only I'd had a hot sexy sister, sigh . . . Thank You. Ronnie W.

Hot, what a great birthday present!!

Bet there are a lot of guys would love this for an 18th birthday.

How about a sequel?

I LOVED IT, IT GOT ME HARD THINKING ABOUT IT!

Could you change out the word boobs? It sounds so 4th grade. Breasts? Tits? anything but boobs.

fucked by sister the brother was really lucky

Ironically I just finished chatting with an 18 y.o. girl that fantisized about fucking a younger brother. She didn't have one but would have liked one and probably would have done the same thing as what happened in the story. Kudos...great story.

i gave myself to my brother too, about the same time my dad got me too. I'm still doin dad, sometimes 2-3 times a week. I luv the control I have over men, esp dad n bro...great read here-I came twice...!

no normal guy would jump into bed with his sister after she fucked her boyfriend as soon as he found out she had a boyfriend he would ignore her and would not talk or look at her get real your story is so stupid she obviously dosen't love her boyfriend too much either

The BF ruined it totally, use common sence and logic please! Theres no way it would happen like that in any stretch of the imagenation.

when she left he would have been very upset and hurt and when she came back and said she had a boyfreind he would have been pissed and avoided and ignored her no way would he ever screw her totally unbelievable as bad as this was no way i will read the second

There are lots of bad stories on literotica. That's part of the whole amateur writer thing, but this is really bad. He "smelt" her perfume?? O my.

Sloppy seconds? Yuck, no thank you.....

Hmmm...love my sister or not, I dunno, even though I've always wanted to fuck her I don't know if I would/could right after her BF had just fucked her. Just the thought of sticking my dick in her where he prolly just sprayed his cum a few hours ago would be a huge turn-off!! Ewww! :(

I was hoping for decent story, but WetBikini fucked it up by not knowing the first thing about punctuation. Learn how and when to use a period to stop your inane run-on sentences, and when to use a comma. And stop using commas when a period is necessary.

THE ONLY BRIGHT SIDE to this horse shit is that it looks like WetBikini fell off the face of the fucking earth.