All Comments on '24 Hours (11:00am - 1:00pm)'

You know I'm becoming one of your biggest fans,don't you? Your skill at description just floors me...you make one feel every tingle, and notice every detail as you do. I wish I could write with half the emotion you bring to a story. Great job, as usual!

DC:

I'm glad you decided to give him a break. I do believe you were trying to kill the poor man. As always it was outstanding. What more can I say. Ronnie W.

warm, passionate and romantic

Impressive...and no red? There is no justice...no talent for crotiquing as well it seems. Vivid...intense...heart thumping. Look forward to the really "good" stuff.

Just starting to read this series. Very romantic, very descriptive. Their love seems to follow a lazy langering feeling yet the hot intense feeling of passion is still present

That was GREAT!!! The imagery and passion that this man obviously has for her was abundantly obvious. I can't wait to read the next one.

Some people say they can write passionate love stories, but the way you write puts you into a different league!

I think Elton John may have summed it up with "A Candle in the Wind". I see that previous postings were done many years ago, so you have probably moved on. All I can say is: you wrote with passion.

Poor intro. Didn’t make me want to read another vague chapter.

This would have been much better if there had been an intro into why they only had 24 hours.