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The Edge of my Rope

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by Anonymous

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by dcpoet4407/04/05

i find that....

this a very cool metaphor, and it took me a couple reads to see it. it has that very dark presense, and yet is taut in its script. there isn't much slack in this one. i sense it may have a reflective appearance in some form. i may be stretching the interpretation. excellent and very effective......don

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by Jennifer C07/04/05

Interesting metaphor

Very dark piece that kinda
haunts you after you read it.
I like it!
Nice work,
Thanks.
~ Jenn

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by Anonymous07/04/05

You are at the end of your rope

and on the edge of your seat. Ropes do not have edges.

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by duckiesmut07/04/05

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Your poem has been mentioned in Monday's New Poems Reviews.

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