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Reverse Masquerade

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/06/05

First Rate

I can't wait to see the movie. You are a fine story teller and have a real knack for keeping descriptions fresh and inviting. Thank you for your contribution.

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by Anonymous07/07/05

I came so hard!

Very erotic, original, hot and forbidden! I love it!

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by Anonymous07/07/05

Oh. My. God.

Amazing. I'm begging you, more, more!

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by Black Tulip07/11/05

Fascinating

Sure, it's a hot story. Even if I don't like that kind of mask much.

But I find the thoughts on identity or the lack of it far more interesting. Good material for a longer story, exploring the concept.

Good luck.

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by shereads08/11/05

Forever surprising.

I didn't expect to enjoy it. I'm not even sure "enjoy" is the right word. But I couldn't look away, and I wasn't sorry.

I envy the way you play with ideas, unafraid.

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by impressive10/20/05

Very interesting

The present tense lessened some of the enjoyment for me, as did a couple of brief POV shifts, but the psych aspect rings true -- and there lies the strength of your tale. Nicely done!

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by Anonymous10/20/06

Wow!

I was going to say "another hot and intriging story" but almost all of your stories are this good - you're an amazing writer:)

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by evilfairy02/01/07

Wow

That was fascinating!! hot, erotic, frightening and intriguing...

i'm off to read more of what you have to offer!

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by Anonymous03/28/16

Stunning

Reminded me of Anais Nin.

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