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Sweet
Such a nice little story of personal discovery.
And I really enjoyed the historical setting, the way you described the horror and despair that the war created.
Very well done, Colleen.
*HUGS*
Out of the shadows...
I felt some of that darkness reigned in behind this story. Sad and melancolly undertones in a story about mutual salvation. And the light shines in at the end. Sometimes you just can't help being romantic, eh? Subtle tensions woven into a solid plot kept me reading.
I was disappointed with one aspect, it was over too soon. ;)
Great work, Colly.
Very lovely
I loved that there was no sex, only implied passion. It is lovely and I enjoyed the descriptive nature of the environment.
Well Done
Shades of Joe Rochfort! I waited until the end to comment on your series. Well conceived, well executed, literate, articulate and sometimes erotic. All in all, well done.
Lovely
As much as I want to beg for more, I think you've ended it perfectly. Sweet, sexy, and touching.
A beautiful way...
to end the chain. Very well done, Colly!
Beautifully written...
As always, Colly, you did a wonderful job and wrote a moving story. :)
Vix
Conclusion
This was a wonderful way to end the chain. It was so sweet and romantic. Keep up the great work!
Chapter 8
Where is Chapter 8. Ha ha ha. Probably your style but an addition or continuation to this story is very much welcome. I gave you only a 3 for i feel that it is incomplete.
Colleen is gone
Colleen died in 2006, so if it's incomplete (which I don't think it is), it's going to stay that way.
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