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"Waya, `ga no `lv `sga u yv tlv'. some ask... wolf the north wind blows...
A-se-quu-i tsi-s-qua is the four winds of freebird..cherokee..
Beautiful poem, but...
in actual written Cherokee, you don't use the dashes, nor the spaces. The title should be written "Asequui tsisqua", and the line in the poem where you have the actual Cherokee would be written: "ganolv `sgauyvtlv'."
Beautiful poem
well written as always,
a little complicated for
me i'll be honest lol
but a lovely read all
the same.
Thanks.
~ Jenn
mentioned
in the new poem reviews.
interesting read
sprinkled with the charm of the witty word wizard, blue
a little extra chant....
that says....nice imagery, and if i may take a stab with a interpretation, i had sense it is related to a possible burial ground. the give away words are *bone yard* now as far as the situation with how the title appeared and how it is relayed in the other comment. i'm assuming you did it like that so one could pronounce it out. i haven't yet done a whole lof or research but i'm an 1/8 and i should know more than i do. i like this the best and it helps solidify my thought:
Piles of harvest leaves
from a dying orchard rustle
as silent headstones mark
time in death's consecration.
******
nicely done......don
very well written...
Without being precociously clever, which this poem could have easily become in more amateurish hands. Thanks for sharing!
I liked it
in the 'slow' thing, and here as well. It is different
look behind the cellar door. sand
What?
You only get a 4 because of dashes and spaces? The poetry police march on. Maybe it's just me, but I thought poetry was about breaking some of the rules. I never got the dashes and spaces memo.
I
Like your vocabulary. Occasionally more provacative than precise, but not unsuccessfully so. Easy.
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Little bit of a Cherokee write,
Something a bit different.
times past.
A dying language ~ once florished vibrant and alive. The passage of time ~ changes everything.
Very well done....
Sorry, I didn't follow the Tribal language...even though I played "Pocahontas" once in a school play, but they spoke the Powhatan language.
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