This story is only partly told mate. It needs at least two more parts. Please carry on.
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Anonymous07/26/05
not bad for start
need more chapters.
by
Anonymous03/22/13
a great start
This author is 18 to 22 years old, so maybe still a late teenager. I bet his young dick was hard when he wrote this and he shot a good healthy load at the end. This is a great beginning for a series, the sister sees her big brother naked as he comes out of the shower, and he really is her big brother! She's enthralled by his long and very fat prick, and it's not even hard yet. The second installment promises some lickety-spit lesbo action, but I'm sure sis's going to get her brother's big stiff prick up her cute little coochie. She's going to be delighted when he unloads his brotherly balls and shoots great big doses of creamy semen up his sister's sweet little twat. Congratulations, young author, on your excellent work.
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Hot but left hanging
Hope you will write some more. Would love to hear if you went further with your brother and i suspect you did! ;)
it okay
It dosen't look like end of story, what happen to her brother after end of story????? Should have ch. 02 soon
A nice start, but where is part 2 & 3
This story is only partly told mate. It needs at least two more parts. Please carry on.
not bad for start
need more chapters.
a great start
This author is 18 to 22 years old, so maybe still a late teenager. I bet his young dick was hard when he wrote this and he shot a good healthy load at the end. This is a great beginning for a series, the sister sees her big brother naked as he comes out of the shower, and he really is her big brother! She's enthralled by his long and very fat prick, and it's not even hard yet. The second installment promises some lickety-spit lesbo action, but I'm sure sis's going to get her brother's big stiff prick up her cute little coochie. She's going to be delighted when he unloads his brotherly balls and shoots great big doses of creamy semen up his sister's sweet little twat. Congratulations, young author, on your excellent work.
Oh wow me and my buddies all came to this
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