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Borderline Ch. 01

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by Anonymous11/04/07

I love this story!

As a gay man, this felt a lot more believable to me that some of the wham-bam trash that passes for gay erotica. This is hot! I love how you built up the erotic tension between the two characters. I can't wait to read the next installment.

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