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A beautiful poem. I completely relate to the sentiment. Love it!
HOT
A very well written
piece of erotica.
This was wonderful
loved it!
Thanks,
~ Jenn
All Us
Yes! I know the feeling. Nicely expressed. ~Imp
Catching my breath here!
Damn! I think I'm going to pass out. Aside from being very hot, this has a great structure and flow. The best I've read in a while. -T.
BRAVA
Truly a masterful piece of poetery.
Well done logo!
BRAVA
Truly a masterful piece of poetery.
Well done logo!
Is there anything you don't do well?
As usual, I am privileged to read your superb writing! Thanks!
phew!
Well done, logo...in a few simple lines, you've captured the essence of love and lust and sex and eroticism and the deep feelings that accompany all that...and it took less words to do that, than for me to write about it! You rock, girl!
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A little too many hackneyed phrases and a little too many porn-like images to be truly erotic but quite hot inspite of that. Nice write.
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That is a Communion that I would gladly get down on my knees for.
ty,bd
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