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Missionary Position

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/06/05

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"He’s got a bible belt quoted tongue
and knuckles quick to knock
vivid visions of government
and a mesmerizing talk"

what an excellent verse! good use of alliteration and fresh images

aswirls

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by dcpoet4407/06/05

excellent........

and i can see the rigid standards seeping right through this one. i can feel it in a lot of different ways. it's a wonderful piece. keep it up......Don

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by Jennifer C07/08/05

Wonderful writing

An excellent use of
words and emotions,
very well written too.
Thanks.
~ Jenn

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