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a longing....
is what i see in this one. there is a lot of genuine feel in this too. it's a nice metaphor you have here. that is my opinion. nicely done art.....don
oh...
et ...this is the poem I read last nite on zen...wow it smacks of wanting, longing...empty ..vortex calling...damn this is good...et...I must put it in my favorites...wooh...you ride the waves and spin the river...yes...
Fabulous as always Art!
I am such a big fan
of your work, you never
dissapoint me. This is a
beautiful piece and left
me with a sense of calm
after I read it. Lovely
work Art, thank you
for writing.
~ Jenn
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