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Daughter

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by Anonymous

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by dcpoet4407/06/05

i relate......

and have been through this and sometimes, still have to go through a tad of it.....nice write........don

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by My Erotic Tale07/06/05

cute poem

kids say the darn'dest things

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by Man Ray07/08/05

This is good...

...well done!

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by msboy807/08/05

Wonderful

Any parent of a girl has or will experience this beautiful chaos. My daughters are 17 & 18, so I can really relate. Thanks for this.

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by Jennifer C07/08/05

Lovely piece

That was beautiful RF,
You pride for your child
shines through in your
writing. I have a little
boy and I know there is no
such love as the love for
your child.
Just lovely, thank you
for sharing,
~ Jenn

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by bigntender07/13/05

Look out!

She's morphing into that state in between childhood and adulthood, when they are non-human. Great description. Hang on tight. It's gonna be a rough ride.

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by LeBroz08/06/05

Love 'em or Strangle 'em

Ah yes - remember it well
she's 14 going on 20
and wanting to date the 19 year old down the street;
no matter your stand, you're wrong
and damned up one side & down the other.

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by Bill Dada01/08/06

Love is a Powerful Thing

And the love of a child is the most powerful force in all of creation.
ty,bd

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by devilnangel208/06/06

Oh the joys of daughters

So beautiful and well-spoken. Each instant is an expectation of mine being a mom of a 7 yr old going on
21.

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