All Comments on 'Daughter'

by RhymeFairy

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dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
i relate......

and have been through this and sometimes, still have to go through a tad of it.....nice write........don

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
cute poem

kids say the darn'dest things

Man RayMan Rayalmost 19 years ago
This is good...

...well done!

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Wonderful

Any parent of a girl has or will experience this beautiful chaos. My daughters are 17 & 18, so I can really relate. Thanks for this.

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Lovely piece

That was beautiful RF,

You pride for your child

shines through in your

writing. I have a little

boy and I know there is no

such love as the love for

your child.

Just lovely, thank you

for sharing,

~ Jenn

bigntenderbigntenderalmost 19 years ago
Look out!

She's morphing into that state in between childhood and adulthood, when they are non-human. Great description. Hang on tight. It's gonna be a rough ride.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Love 'em or Strangle 'em

Ah yes - remember it well

she's 14 going on 20

and wanting to date the 19 year old down the street;

no matter your stand, you're wrong

and damned up one side & down the other.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Love is a Powerful Thing

And the love of a child is the most powerful force in all of creation.

ty,bd

devilnangel2devilnangel2over 17 years ago
Oh the joys of daughters

So beautiful and well-spoken. Each instant is an expectation of mine being a mom of a 7 yr old going on

21.

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