All Comments on 'My Surprise Present'

As part of my effort to keep my personal opinions on marital fidelty out of my criticisms, I liked the writing and the story. Not my personal cup of tea but a good story. Needs to be just a tad hotter for the catagory though.

A good five.

Regards

Forget what the last guy said, the buildup was hot! You don't have to got stright to sex for the story to be hot. This was perfect. The tease is the hottest part and you left the perfect ending for a sequel. I also like the fact that your women in the story don't have monster 44DDD boobs. Very well written. Thanks

He was one lucky man!

I always look ahead; what is she going to want when her birthday pops up???

No one ever gave me that kind of a present for my xmas birthday. Biff got something really special. And it does help that they are still quite young; marriage can probably survive some rule-breaking.

And it's a good bet that Kelly will be looking for something just as good when her birthday comes up.

Fair is fair.

I'd love to have a birthday present like that.

This is an EROTIC story.

And as a story it was good too. What was the surprise going to be? It had a little mystery to it and the whole weekend---wow!

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Stylish and loving couple. Snoking fetish, not for me. The other stuff, who cares.

Is there goin' to be a sequel to this wild weekend?

This is like the perfect fantasy sounds like you must of had the best weekend of your life.Was it a true event

That reminds me "be careful what you wish for, you might get it."

Paybacks are a bitch unless you are a closet cuck.

Bit more cum share at the end would be great