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Super Hot!
This story had everything I like in a group sex story, double penetration, hot lesbian action, a big dildo and true love. Very well done, SJ.
I've Always
""What do you think we should try next?"
"Oh colin Darling, I've always wanted to fuck a Shetland Pony while I sucked a German Shepherd's cock till he came in my mouth. May I please Colin darling? I love you so much. I shall always love you my darling but I have to do this. I've wanted it for such a long time. May I? Huh , Huh, Huh!!!!!
Did I just miss it?
It was a decent story except that -- unless I skipped over it -- Colin never got to fuck Lori.
All he got from the experience was eye candy and half a blow job from Lori. Oh, yeah: and he got to fuck his wife twice. But they didn't need a friend to do that.
I have to give you an incomplete on this one.
And the Fair Sharing Score is
Wife 2 sexual partners - Husband "0" - say whose fantasies are we talking about here - he didn't cum out fairly did he!
So, he can watch again or just leave the house after saying have fun but remember I love you poopsie???? Typical eh!
My Personal Fantasy
I loved the story. It brought to life something I have always wanted but will most likely never have. A threesome with either sex. Great Job!
A fine story, SJ
It's okay to write a story that women will like. And this one is hot as hell to read for me too. I guess some of your comments are from guys who are looking for the more cliched story where the action is centered on the male ... I sort of like being in Jen's mind and watching her find fulfillment through Colin's fantasy .... he didn't seem upset, and I'm not either. In fact I find it, as all your sex writing is, "invigorating." lol ;-) Good Job, SJ
Very Hot and Sexy!
I liked the love you showed between the couple. The sex was hot and it's always been a fantasy of mine to do a MFM. Lots of good ideas you gave me. Great job!
Not only for women!
Wauw, this really is a hot,hot,hot story.
And, since you left it hanging... I'd love to read the sequel.
Nice job
Nice job. Can't wait to read the sequel.
Really nice
Damn, this was a good story. Lots of hot sex and believable development, lots of fun reading and a healthy honesty that only comes with confidence and love beween the characters.
Lovely
Even with a fever and the flu, this story aroused me sexually and emotionally. Well done, Soph. Keep up the good work!
Wonderful
Hot and sexy and sounds just the way I'd like to experience threesomes of both varieties. :)
Crim
OMG!!!!!!!
Speechless...
and you know me... that doesn't happen very often!!!!!
Wonderful!
Nice work, I was there in the moment, carried away by the descriptions and the ease with which it read.
Jeezum crow!
Well this one takes the cake--been reading several of your stories, and this is one of your best--the story is erotic, and shows you a good handle of the middle ground in this type of writing, which many do not (including myself; but there's a place for that too, methinks). Cheers,
D.
3 x Hot
Loved your story. Colin didn't have to fuck Lori to make this story hot. Looking forward to the sequel.
ty,bd
Super hot, SJ!
Hey, darlin', this was incredible. Both in theme and execution. Your writing is intricate and drawn out. Your dialog marvelous. I loved it. ESL
Well Done
Excellent story, SJ. The characters were real, not at all the plastic characters of poor writing. The words flowed well, the characters stayed in character, and it was hot.
Q_C
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