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Very sexxy
a slow sensual build up of that magical first kiss, excellent piece Jenn, a pleasure to read xxx
kiss
thank you J~
your poetry is a delight to read.
nice one
sexy is right. ;)
nice......
and loved the anxiety as if worried of performance......great job.......don
tightly woven...
and the fit was like puzzle pieces..made of chocolate....smiles/blue
tender words
great poem ~ it leads nicely into First Fuck!
~Honey
Taut
Verse sparse,
the mind completes it;
vividly sharing
a memory
of a first kiss
everlasting
A WONDERFUL VISION,
of how passion ignites
from a flicker to a flame,
and explodes within..
wonderfully done...
-sGp-
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