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Intriguing
Very good, except for the bondage. After the first fuck, he should have release her so she could squirm around a bit and gotten her 'nuts' and fucked back at him.
I enjoyed your stroke story
You should add more chapters of them fucking for conception.Maybe include some pregnant bondage sex. smile.
great...
good warning at the top of the story! LOL
maybe the same traditional marriage only loving anonymous ass that leaves stupid comments on my stuff will steer clear of this one! LOL
great as always babe...
you're gonna get me into bondage yet! LOL ;)
kisses,
T
WTF???
The only segment of the tale that made it somewhat believable was this:
[[Suddenly Jack felt a little angry, "Hey, didn't you guys want to bother asking ME about this? I mean, find out how comfortable I am fucking my friend's wife? And having you guys TAPE it? I didn't have a problem being a sperm donor, but don't you think you should've consulted me about this?"]]
I realise this is supposed to be 'Erotica', but that little statement from Jack made me much more empathic with him. Of course, he finally wimps out and does the bit, after all, can't hold up the show.
Truth be told, I'd be infuriated if my 'friends' pulled that kind stunt on me (and they would then cease to be my friends.)
Cute
However, to increase the odds of getting pregnant she should get fucked every day for 3 or 4 days.
Risky behavior
What about a second kid? What about feeling uncomfortable around each other after this little escapade? This is an accident waiting to happen.
loved it
Short and sweet. Well-written and straight to the point. I wish he'd come back the next day.
Don't see how he continued
Once he found her tied up he should have immediately cut her loose and left. This whole thing is a little weird. I wonder what his wife will think? And getting it taped? That should have been all it took to get him out of there, fast. No, this whole thing is a disaster. Time to go.
Doors Song
People are strange.
It's a bit of a big chance and I like the fact that you didn't just have him go 'Doh...Okay' like a great big dumb doofus. He was hurt and a bit angry at being used liked this.
None of the thought through the consequences...but that wasn't what this story was about.
Clear writing for and a moderately plausible story. I don't think much of the hubby, but that is me. Wife, despite being tied up, is truly int he driver's seat in that marriage.
The best way to read a story like this is to put yourself in Jack's shoes. Since he isn't a total moral idiot, like most of the OM (and yes, he IS a cheater) it's a bit easier to slide into that POV.
That makes it a guy having hot sex with a fantasy, instead of imagining oneself as the poor asshole jerking off in the closet.
Excellent!
Too bad it wasn't me that walked into that house! :-( I would love to ravage a tied up woman.
Too implausible
After he cuts her loose, he's gone. Just too weird. Poorly conceived story.
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