All Comments on 'Tied Up Wifey'

Very good, except for the bondage. After the first fuck, he should have release her so she could squirm around a bit and gotten her 'nuts' and fucked back at him.

You should add more chapters of them fucking for conception.Maybe include some pregnant bondage sex. smile.

good warning at the top of the story! LOL

maybe the same traditional marriage only loving anonymous ass that leaves stupid comments on my stuff will steer clear of this one! LOL

great as always babe...

you're gonna get me into bondage yet! LOL ;)

kisses,

T

The only segment of the tale that made it somewhat believable was this:

[[Suddenly Jack felt a little angry, "Hey, didn't you guys want to bother asking ME about this? I mean, find out how comfortable I am fucking my friend's wife? And having you guys TAPE it? I didn't have a problem being a sperm donor, but don't you think you should've consulted me about this?"]]

I realise this is supposed to be 'Erotica', but that little statement from Jack made me much more empathic with him. Of course, he finally wimps out and does the bit, after all, can't hold up the show.

Truth be told, I'd be infuriated if my 'friends' pulled that kind stunt on me (and they would then cease to be my friends.)

However, to increase the odds of getting pregnant she should get fucked every day for 3 or 4 days.

What about a second kid? What about feeling uncomfortable around each other after this little escapade? This is an accident waiting to happen.

Short and sweet. Well-written and straight to the point. I wish he'd come back the next day.

Once he found her tied up he should have immediately cut her loose and left. This whole thing is a little weird. I wonder what his wife will think? And getting it taped? That should have been all it took to get him out of there, fast. No, this whole thing is a disaster. Time to go.

People are strange.

It's a bit of a big chance and I like the fact that you didn't just have him go 'Doh...Okay' like a great big dumb doofus. He was hurt and a bit angry at being used liked this.

None of the thought through the consequences...but that wasn't what this story was about.

Clear writing for and a moderately plausible story. I don't think much of the hubby, but that is me. Wife, despite being tied up, is truly int he driver's seat in that marriage.

The best way to read a story like this is to put yourself in Jack's shoes. Since he isn't a total moral idiot, like most of the OM (and yes, he IS a cheater) it's a bit easier to slide into that POV.

That makes it a guy having hot sex with a fantasy, instead of imagining oneself as the poor asshole jerking off in the closet.

Too bad it wasn't me that walked into that house! :-( I would love to ravage a tied up woman.

After he cuts her loose, he's gone. Just too weird. Poorly conceived story.

If it were me i would have fucked her then told her she was a worthless whore and her husband was a pathetic cuck for letting other men fuck his wife because it's not just about getting pregnant and then told them to never contact me again.

Too creepy for words. Untie her hands and leave. Knowing that they were recording the whole mess would have been a deal breaker all by itself. Run, don't walk, to find some new friends. Ugly idea,

1 star

Cheating whore with a cuck in the closet.

I would of preferred that this Child be conceived from tender love making than from deceitful Rough SEX.

I read this story out of curiosity. It sure didn't create a hard-on or lustful thoughts.

I rated it highly but it only deserved a 2 at best.

I'd have to do this task every day for a couple of weeks just to make sure it took, you can't expect one shot to do the job. After a couple of weeks toiling away for them Bob and Carol would so used to me fucking Carol it should/would become normal for me to drop ......

The beautiful baby girl should have a baby sister and brother - right?

Not many could resist a naked woman tied to a bed as the little brain takes over i know in my case it does and id have to spear my cock into her and empty my sperm as deep as i can inside her with one desire to make her swell with my offspring. I love breeding women and have been doing so for over 20 years.

Pity that a child was born into the middle of this madness.

hot story. to all the nay sayers- it's a short story, don't worry about the kid, or the 2nd kid, the video or jack's wife, the story isn't about all that...

Imbecilic story.

Pay attention author, I am only going to school you on this ONE TIME.

A cheating wife is not a loving wife

PERIOD