by LuciousBi-Writes4U
excellent L~
I do like the way you write...<grin>
nice addition, a perfect topping for the cake
now eat it too <grinin>
excellent L~
I do like the way you write...<grin>
nice addition, a perfect topping for the cake
now eat it too <grinin>
great read enticing and sensual as always!
great write as always Lucious One.
...of the Bare Bottom Resort. Of course getting there was all the fun. As always, after reading one of your stories, I am sitting here typing, rock hard and yearning for release.
Hugs, BD
The story was OK to good, but your failure of proof of familiarity with a dictionary was distracting, e.g., use of "slide" for "slid" and "beer winch" instead of "wench". A "winch" is a cable used to pull heavy loads with a piece of heavy equipment such as a bulldozer.