This was really excellent work. The quality of the writting...the storyline...the depth created by the roundness of each character...really excellent work.
There is only two things wrong with your 7 chapter story. One it was too short and two just when it was getting really good you chiffhung the story and I had to go back to your index to get the next chapter.
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Anonymous11/04/07
Left me feeling really good all over.
This story made me feel good inside and out. Thank you for writing a gay love story that has hot sex, romance, and genuine emotional chemistry between the characters. Please write more.
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Anonymous11/17/07
11 out of 10
that was an amzing story. i felt it in my body all over. the story was so hot and filled with so much emotion. and ur sexy voice made it so much better.
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Anonymous10/21/08
AWESOME AMAZING
I love it, it has one of the best story lines but I agree IT IS TOO SHORT! Please MORE!! I am totally in love with this!
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Excellent...
This was really excellent work. The quality of the writting...the storyline...the depth created by the roundness of each character...really excellent work.
EEP
Only two thing wrong!
There is only two things wrong with your 7 chapter story. One it was too short and two just when it was getting really good you chiffhung the story and I had to go back to your index to get the next chapter.
Left me feeling really good all over.
This story made me feel good inside and out. Thank you for writing a gay love story that has hot sex, romance, and genuine emotional chemistry between the characters. Please write more.
11 out of 10
that was an amzing story. i felt it in my body all over. the story was so hot and filled with so much emotion. and ur sexy voice made it so much better.
AWESOME AMAZING
I love it, it has one of the best story lines but I agree IT IS TOO SHORT! Please MORE!! I am totally in love with this!
Very romantic story!
Oh this definitely hit my sweet spot. Thank you so much for posting it. Very romantic and erotic.
Such an excellent story!
I love a good romance and good erotic telling of sexual interaction that doesn't have to be vulgar in order to convey passion! Well done!
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