I liked it, but the grammer and spelling where poor.
Can't wait to read more about the end of the summer....and wasn't at all distracted by any mispellings. By the way, don't you mean "grammar" and "were"?
There was a whole lot of build up for a lacking amount of action. If you wrote more about it, it would be nice.
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bad grammer
I liked it, but the grammer and spelling where poor.
loved it!
Can't wait to read more about the end of the summer....and wasn't at all distracted by any mispellings. By the way, don't you mean "grammar" and "were"?
Not enough action.
There was a whole lot of build up for a lacking amount of action. If you wrote more about it, it would be nice.
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