by apple231601
It would be interesting if the next chapter had some similarities with chp. 7 from the minatour series.
Nature really seems to work against the unfortunate males here. It's almost surprising that the finals aren't all female. Having to focus on staying hard and not injuring your balls for all that time whilst straining not to cum and being forced to watch as the girls have all those orgasms and taunt your dick size. The poor guys must get jealous! Or in this society do they accept their role as instruments of female pleasure?
This was a wonderful story, well told, and I can't wait for the next installment.
BUT.
The bad spelling, including words I could not interpret at all, really forced the score from a 5 to a 3. Please, please, use a spell checker. It won't fix everything, but at least they can be recognizable words.