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Dance of Days Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/13/05

Mmmmm... Tarts....

And a Tart. I always like those romantic interludes in bed. While for some it's just not sex unless there is some twist to it. I always prefered making love. And that is what this story is about. Being in love and making love and just being happy with each other.

Nice work.

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by Goldeniangel07/15/05

sweet =)

it's just so wonderfully sweet and intimate! you know i love it =)

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by McKenna07/15/05

You're such a tease!

That twist at the end is intriguing... I feel like asking, "Please sir, can I have some more?" Nicely done.

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by Colleen Thomas07/16/05

Sweet

I loved the tone, the way the story felt like the line in the poem, loving and giving :)

Well Done!

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by Dar~07/16/05

Very Nice

Very nice, the salivea thew me until the very end. Nice job.

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by Liar07/17/05

Hehe.

Really cute story. The ending had me grinning, when small hints throughout the text eventually made sense. Good job!

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by Anonymous07/17/05

New definition...

of "kept man",,,? grin - very nice
-Rowan

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by Anonymous07/22/05

Good story

Very enjoyable. :)

Vix

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