All Comments on 'Corrupting His Older Sister'

by Barry C

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
what

thats it? you've got to be kidding me?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
don't knock it

only giving a 50 because i did agree it was too short but

the description does say he gets her to expose herself not actually do anything more than that even though it was hinted at. who knows? maybe the author will decide to finish the story or at least give it a second part?

oldwayneoldwayneover 16 years ago
Couldn't Rate It!

Sorry BC, but it's not incest! I think it could have been a good tale, had you bothered to finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Invite

This story was meant to have other chapters but dont have time anyone who wants to take this as a starting point and run with it please do

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

I read about 6 lines, but with so many errors I could read no more!

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