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Planted Imagery~
You have to know. I loved this poem. Very vividly you paint the picture. My minds eye echos of lost ... pain ... very moving poem here...
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Your poem was mentioned in the Sunday reviews
du lac~
Excellent!
Spare use of language but the images are strong and I agree with Rhyme Fairy--it's a very moving poem, prayerlike.
:)
Angeline
nice vineyard blue
torns on beauty that are blue.
images do leave....
nice things in the folds of darkness and vivid in this case.......nicely done.......don
really deep poem
This is one of your best, deep, profound and compelling... in short...perfect!
QP
What are you putting...
in your coffee? You are knocking them out of the park,
and this is a grand slam. Great layout and wording.
sand
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