All Comments on 'Encounter on the Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A nice little story

A nice little story. The only flaw is that it changes tenses from past to present and back again. It would read better if it was all past tense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Fun story massage as foreplay angle is well done

Th story is fun, and erotic. I found the massage very sexy.

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