All Comments on 'One Summer Morning...'

Dave sounds like a child predator.

Very nice story with only a few Grammer mistakes. I would differently read the next chapter if there is one and I hope there is.

I absolutely love seduction stories. We all started with someone, usually an older man with a bigger cock. Most start getting sucked, then suck and finally fucked. Once you start you are addicted to the hot, exciting , wonderful lure of man sex.

An okay story but since you said it was from your own experience it would have been much better told first person. It's also very clunky and reads more like a text book than a seduction.

Vasoline? I would think a guy like Dave would keep some lube around and not something junior high school kids use to jerk off with.

I loved it I hope you add to the story soon!!!

need more parts to this one

Does either Dave or Andy have a bit of manly chest hair for their muscular chests? I think some chest hair on Dave might be expected (for his age and maturity), but if Andy had a dusting of chest hair, THAT would be a very sexy sight! In high school locker rooms, I always enjoyed a guy who stripped to reveal a bit of chest hair for his muscular chest!

Well written, it gave me a pleasurable erection!