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Do!
It would be nice, at times, if we could just turn it off. Wouldn't it? Love doesn't work that way, though. Keep loving. Its force makes the world a nicer place, even if it does not come back to you from the desired direction.
You can't turn it off and you can't turn it on
Life would be so much easier if love were an elective emotion.
*k*
Absolute honesty.
Honesty is a must, and this is so honest, so heartfelt as to be palpable. (*a rose for you, and one for love*)
Romantical~
Oh such sweet, heartfelt emotions comes shining through. What a wonderful dedication to your love. Very honorable of you. I love the imagery, flow ... and feelings this poem brings out. Sorry for your lost love my friend ... shoot for the moon~ All the Luck of the Irish to ya~
I'm speechless
I don't really know what to say except that we've all been there, I think, at one time or another. Lovely poem.
Welcome to lit
very nice piece,
romantic and sweet,
loved it!
Thanks
~ J
Love
This is a bittersweet poem ~ one that expresses what so many of us of gone through. What we have to remember is that it is better to have loved, then never to have loved at all...
~Honey
Human experience
The beauty of human experience is how it is achingly familiar to each of us. Well written.
From the heart?.
Read like it: honest, clear, too touching to not shed a tear.
Great Work
This was one sad poem, but you can tell it was written from the heart and I absolutely love it. Good work!
Title
The title says it all. Gave me shivers.
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