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by dcpoet4407/11/05

this has the look....

in all seriousness, especially right from the very beginning. i enjoy how you work with the seed. to me it has a different flair from the norm. it makes one think to make sure to grow the right one. the last two lines staple the poem together. the end had a punch.....nicely done......don

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by rose butterfly07/12/05

I read more in it than just a seed

In this ....i saw more than just a seed .... i see what we do in life....what we sow to and water and protect and nourish.......and what becomes of that.....we must choose the right things to nourish......thank you for this read.

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