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Perfection
Simplistic .... Perfection
I love it~!!
congradulations
transmorfi.... why didn't I try that
moon and lightening in the same sky, mystical.
what i saw
in the lightening flash..
Wonderful image and use of simple language to paint a split second of time
Thank you
great impact....
for a itty bitty little poem. like that shapely silhouette image too. congrats on the "E"......very nice......don
Perfect
The New Yorker posts have nothing on this one!!!
QP
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Your poem has been mentioned in Monday's New Poems Reviews.
Congrats
on the E! Well deserved
A well deserved E
Wonderful poem blue,
just lovely.
Thanks.
~ J
Sometimes...
...eroticism doesn't drip, it smokes. Congrats on the E.
lovely
perfect little flash lighting up the silhouette of a moment. sensual.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
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