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Echoing Beats~
I feel it Art. Gripping lil poem ya got here. I *see* you tied up ... Pacing ... Steaming ...
Loved this poem.
dripping
with raw emotional images of outrage at total inhumane actions...well done...the title does not impact well on this however,,,its such a great poem..
some might miss because the title seems flippant..imho..0))lol/blue
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Excellent work! I felt it right along with you.
i'm not trading places....
for a thousand years of what i read here. very moving with some damn good imagery here......very nice.......don
Title
I have to give 5 before reading the poem because the title is so damn eye catching! However I notice the titled has been questioned for not reflecting the gravity of the poem which is a valid point.
The poem is full of sentiment and good imagery too and well worth the praise.
b'brig
Nice job
i especially liked the first three verses...thanks.
Brilliant
Well done Art
another gem you
have here!
Well done,
loved it!
Thanks.
~ J
5's not enough - deserves at least a 10
And blow the top off the thermometer!!!
intense and gut-wrenching
to the roots of the soul
the title serves well;
let down your guard and experience it,
the Mack truck delivers it full bore,
the mind-numbing horror
of the shredding
of joyous innocence
hear ya, Art
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If I chew BBQ flavored bubble gum, will I write this well?
ty, bd
Insulate
Fortifying oneself against the horrors of this world.
interesting
loved the imagery of this poem!
NO PERVERSION HERE
the death parts us all. TK U MLJ LV NV
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