All Comments on 'How I Spent My Vacation Ch. 01'

This is one of the best -if not the best- spanking and humiliation story that I have ever read. The domination of the three girls is exquisitelly described. I hope that the following chapters come out quick and that the domination process proceeds further and with the same good descriptions.

GREAT JOB

WOW, I never really liked spanking stories but this one captured me and led me down the road of depravity slowly by the hand..... sometimes willingly, sometimes not :)

Really great story altho I admit I skipped a bit I was too scared to read :P

great story i want more.

IT IS VERY LONG HAVING NO GOOD DISCRIPTION. DONT READ IF U SUPPOSE TO TURN ONN. IT IS NOT SEXY BUT CONTAINS LOTS OF NON-SCENCE NARRATION. TOTALLY WASTE OF TIME.

This is one of the best i've ever read, just makes me want more

Excellent job Rembrandt. No sex, just spanking, you could have gone under 18 with that content. Very nicely set up, good character development and lots of promise of a long summer of spanking for the girls. I'm not sure you could continue the high level of this story, and perhaps it is better left wide open for imagination, but I would really love to see sequels. Hell, I am inspired to write something in this genre myself. Very well done.

So fucking hot! I came twice reading your story. Thanks!

I have in the past had a few events where i spanked someone then seeing the crying and submission afterwards having gotten a serious erection-enjoyed myself.

spanking to me is erotic...some on a few spank/chat websites liked the spanking by itself-to me sex and spanking go togeather.

this story didnt? everyone likes women interacting-many dont feel the same way about guys....men like the submission from whomeever they bendover.

I definitely have a thing for spanking but I found this sick. I understand the difference between fantasy and reality but I don't think anyone should glorify non-consent. There is nothing hotter than BDSM when it's done right but this, this was just a horrible tale of abuse.

It is obvious you have a talent for writing. Really enjoyed the way you told this story. It's too bad there weren't additional chapters written...I was hoping it would have progressed into having some sexuality in it.