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Miami – Grocery Store Lust

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by Tathagata07/12/05

david byrne said

" The world moves on a womans hips
the world moves and it swivels and bops'

it reminded me of your verse:
~The world is a Rumba
and the women around
me hear the rhythm.~

I've seen this too
very nicely captured

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by nb_ero11/14/05

Yes!

Exquisite ;)

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