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by Anonymous07/12/05

this verse

would be a grand one to read at a open mic poetry gathering...it would capture an audience...bluerain

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by Angeline07/16/05

This is good!

I'm glad you directed me to it. The simplicity of the rhyme works beautifully with the theme.

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by Anonymous07/25/05

Hey!

I remember when we did these! This is good- a nice flow from line to line. Except it goes
abba
aabb
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That kinda threw me. Is it a specific form? I thought Villanelle at first, but I know you like Triolets. But I can't figure out which it is.

TY, Rem...

Boo

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