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Miami – Canadian Moose Kings

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by Anonymous

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by Tathagata07/13/05

Perfect

ending.
: )

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by Anonymous07/13/05

Ha!

All those boys wanted was for you to listen, and they got it!

A little fat in the middle, but a very nice poem.

Fly

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by Anonymous07/13/05

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agree with Fly, and have thought these things, having spent a great deal of time with adolescents, you capture it well. Don't you remember discovering these things for yourself? Like are you a human dreaming you are a butterfly or a butterfly dreaming it is human? We need to pass through millions of years of evolution and enjoy the memories of our journey watching.... annas

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