All Comments on 'A Virtual Temptress Ch. 04'

Capital stuff.

I really want to see more of the two of then interacting.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Good work as usual

Amazing

You have talent. I like the world building but I'm not into the succubus domination. If it moves to a point that they're equal or something I might come back but I'm done.

This is some really quality femdom/malesub! You do a great job of setting up these interactions. I'm really interested to find out the source of all this. It seems like the natural thing to do—if he wants to escape from the succubus, that is—is to stay close to other PCs, which could lead to some really interesting turns. But I'm a sucker for new characters.

Regardless, the succubus is really well-written and you do a great job conveying how the protagonist is feeling! Fantastic!

I'm on the other end of the spectrum from one of the other commentators. I really love the succubus dom aspect, and find that it is part of the fantasy of succubus stories in general. They are temptresses and seducers, after all.

Really can't wait for your next update. Lexi is a beautiful demoness name.

It's been a lot of fun writing this, so I'm glad you guys are enjoying it! The story's been coming together pretty smoothly, and I'm excited to see what everyone thinks of the next chapter.

I would like the idea of this AI demoness having weaknesses and needing his help to avoid monster hunters or programmers trying to remove her from the game moreso than her turning him into a babbling mess and halting his player progression. 5 stars regardless.

So good!