All Comments on 'Succubus'

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LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Ualmost 19 years ago
nice work!

GO GIRL!

That was great!

keep it up!!

Kisses,

T

Tarot BarnesTarot Barnesalmost 19 years ago
Cool

Perhaps a little too short, but otherwise excellent. This really deserves a sequel!

Thanks,

Tarot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Wicked!!!

Please, bring on another chapter. That's one hot theme

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
VERY GOOD STROKE STORY...GoldenAngel

I hope the priest knocks her up with his baby. smile.

GalloglaichGalloglaichover 14 years ago
Great Job

For being a tad short, this was really interesting. Poor priest, I almost feel sorry for him...

Wait, what am I saying? I'd kill to be in his place. Great work; I really liked it.

Da1337dudeDa1337dudeabout 12 years ago
That was pretty hot until...

...until it started to get too much like rape, both on her side with the surprise mounting and his side with the physical assault.IMO, leave it out next time, but I know it floats some peoples' boats.

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