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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/14/05

Luscious!

A sweet and delicious poem, Anna. Wonderful!

Fly

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by Anonymous07/14/05

Oh!

Anna! I love this! I'm going to stick it on my 'fridge door. You say so much with so little!

Tess

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by dcpoet4407/15/05

very nice......

and the words chosen really pack it in very tight. it makes me think on the interpreting of it. i've got ideas though. i enjoy the strawberries for sure......don

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by Bill Dada01/25/06

Some poems

seem to invite interpretation, while others have only one meaning which walks through the door before them. That meaning is their's, 'not mine.'

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