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by LeBroz07/14/05

Holes in Pockets.......

can be tricky and you can lose your thoughts
nice work

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by Anonymous07/14/05

Like fumbling for change

and finding a twenty! Very nice, Willow.

There are some spelling errors, but maybe that enhances the linty feel!

Fly

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by dcpoet4407/16/05

like this a bunch.....

as it can be read in different directions. nice write.....don

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