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bitch
story line is good but the end is not!.
I think everyone should get ONE second chance
And that the penalty for a second offense should be immolation.
Not Quite Buying It
But if hubby is happy, I guess I am.
But a couple of things don't quite add up. At least one of the calls from Juan was 15 minutes, kind of long if not a romantic call. And why would Sally tell the police that Juan was Jill's boyfriend? Juan's dead now, so what nefarious motive would she have if it wasn't true?
KarenE
sally was still pointing fingers because her goal in life is to break up the relationship of Jake and Jill Martin. all else is immaterial. She would post jihad statements on websites, make verbal threats on the phone, or plant illegal drugs in order to bring down the full force and majesty of the US justice system, or to put it in plain terms, she wanted them apart and locked up away from each other for the rest of their lives .
Wow. Ridiculous is a word that is sometimes over used
But in this case, it doesn't even come close to describing this shit! Instead of going through all the garbage, trying to separate it and describe how bad it was, I think the best course in this case is to just shove it straight into the landfill, and keep walking!
Good job
Love your writing. Thanks for your efforts to entertain us.
Forced Happy Ending
Totally twisted characters to come to an absurd reconciliation. She just accepts the fact that he went out and offed her lover? Pathetic. Unbelieveable.
AND SOMETIMES THE OPPOSITE OCCURS
time wounds all heels. TK U MLJ LV NV
nice job
very nice. Well written with a bit of natural justice thrown in!
Yuck
She had her choices and she made her decisions. Her husband and son had to pay the price of her lust. Even after she was caught, she continued to hang out with Sally, was she an idiot? No, she was a lawyer so we know she had some intelligence. She was and always will be a selfish egotistical turd. It is a common condition that many lawyers share. Of course Jake was a lawyer too, so he should understand that better than most. He never expressed any real interest in working things out for the sake of little Jake. It was all about his hurt feelings. These two are disgusting. With the exception of little Jake (and only because he was a child) there was not one decent character in this whole story. It was a bowl full of turds!
Believe her?
How can any sane person believe her? She just lied and lied and even threatened to go see Juan if he didn't forgive her. HE was the hurt partner! How dare she threaten?
At the risk of sounding uncaring, I wouldn't stay with her, kid or no kid! Do you know why?...... Because you can NEVER come back from AMAZING sex (twosomes included) She even pushed it in his FACE! Since she lied about everything else, she SHOULD have lied about how great the sex was to spare his feelings. It will take 19 miracles for this marriage to last! It's unfair to BOTH of them to stay together because SHE'LL never forget the fantastic sex and HE'LL never fully trust her again. I know you RAAC's don't agree but since you're not living in the REAL world, it's understandable and you are forgiven!
cum eater
You probably licks the cum from your wife's pussy when her lover is through. Your " new" ending sucked.
FANTASY
Nice alternate ending. She was still a shit, just a remorseful one
You can promise anything, but
5-10 years from now attitudes change and opportunities will arise. She should have dumped her and moved on. Time does heal. He just needs to get away from her.
He is a lawyer?
"I seen" used not once, but twice. Come on!
Garbage
Another horribly forced reconciliation.
where are chaps 1 thru 6
It would have been a decent read if I could have found the beginning.
I have read from A thru the beginning of L. I dont score all your stories because I read them on a tabletwnd have to do too many maneuvers to get back to the score board but I enjoy most of them, acouple very much.
Keep up tue writing, but you, and your editors, could uee some help with your grammar.
TIME DOES NOT HEAL WOUNDS
its the body and the mind. TK U MLJ LV NV
Amazing!
I'll tell you what's amazing, is tthawthis guy took the cheater back. He could still have a relationship with his son BUT never with the lying, cheating wife. She had all kinds of reasons (excuses) why she cheated but the bottom line is that she cheated and is now a cheater who had amazing sex with another. I'm glad her lover died but she should also be dead to her husband...hopefully ex-husband. Thanks for the story.
Good
Loved it excellent work.
So the fancy lawyer says he seen Juan, did he?
Yes, words do matter even if one's not a grammar Nazi.
ONCE A CHEATING SLUT
always a cheating slut...should let her go to rot in the gutter and move on with his life....not worth the bother as she will always tell lies to get what she wants...
Healing
Every situation is different.
Her finally ditching the evil friend let him know she was serious about marriage.
I think she knows husband was responsible and realizes that she doesn't want to cross him in the future.
I like it!
Very good job of story telling!
Most problems taken care of!
Most of the problems were taken of with one exception SALLY! Jill did talk tuff to her but, Jake need a finale interaction with her: a little physical contact, a little ass kicking just a little.
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