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Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Needs grammar corrected

This, so far, is an interesting story. The lack of punctuation and poor grammar sometimes make it more difficult to understand. I would suggest using a proof reader to correct errors.

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Constructive criticism always welcome, that is constructive underlined. I go through obsessive writing bouts before the block strikes. I hope that getting feedback here will unblock those blocks that have plagued me in the past, When I get blocked with one story I will move...

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