All Comments on 'Magic Train'

O my goodness that sent goose bumps all over my body, that was totally erotic and awesome. Well done. Keep up the great job.

they were in the middle of the field on the 50 yard line during a December Game in the snow wildly fucking in front of 120,000 chanting fans. Well, maybe not quite that real but cmon the absurdity of it entirely distracted my attention to reading!!

Wow i loved this story what a turn on..so erotic yet tender..great job

Wow i loved this story what a turn on..so erotic yet tender..great job

Wow! You covered so many of the deep, dark fantasies that I've harbored for so long in one incredible story. You have a real talent. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Beautiful.

Really loved the imagery you used in this the idea of sex in a public train and spanking umm soo good. keep writing.