All Comments on 'Beach Party'

A story of great warmth, humour, erotisism and huge amounts of heart. And well told too.. Well done indeed!

Nice job, Cat. I see you decided to leave the ending. Now, what about the orgy for part 2?

~elizabeth

This story so nicely shows that illness is not the end.

Well done.

Great story and well written. I can relate because I, also, am a Cancer Survivor. We are the only ones who can understand the feelings of that night. It's undescribable! Keep up the good work. Your story was very realistic.

What a nice surprise you have for us! Well done!

Little story, big message; like it a lot!

wrapped up in a neat little package. how you managed to make me all choked up in such a short space in time, i'll never know but i invite you to do it time and time again.

BRAVO~

Erotic is in the eye of the beholder. Nudity need not be erotic. I think this story was a good illustration of that. Thanks, Cat, for the story.

Part of what makes sexuality so wonderful is that it is a celebration of life. Sex at its best is two people's affirmation and total love and acceptance of one another. It's a way of thumbing our noses at death, saying, "Today I'm not dead, today I'm alive!"

<p>Your main character not only receives this total love and acceptance from her husband, but from her whole department. Not in a sexual way, but still in a way that is deeply moving and human. The loss of dignity one goes through as an extremely ill patient, that dignity is returned and restored magnificently.

<p>I'm having a hard time summing this up in words. I showed this to my wife and she agrees: it's a beautiful story.

<p>Bravo!

awww this was cute

That. Was. BEAUTIFUL.

Fantastic, incredibly emotional. Life isn't all cheerleaders and super models.

A lovely wonderful story!