All Comments on 'Before the Fall'

by jebeddo

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kydreamrkydreamrover 18 years ago
Glad you kept your nerve

Good training and a great desire to live can make the difference between life and death. I'd say that the author still has nightmares about that fateful day, and for good reason. I'm just sorry so few others checked the situation out before making their decision.

batjac69batjac69over 18 years ago
until you are there

Until you are there no one knows what it takes to fight to live while others give up.

My only concern is for the families who might read this whose loved ones did jump. God give them peace.

You wrote a very good short story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
wow - awestruck - breathless

That story takes my breath away. Very evocative style of writing too. Is this true story? If so, and even if not, thank you for sharing.

jebeddojebeddoover 18 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thank you for your praise. No, it's not a true story, but it didn't take long to write. Just one of those ideas the pop up, you know?

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