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nice read......
throughout. it is the third stanza that rocks the most for me. though the piece is quite the trembler here.....very nice......don
great form
I loved the way it looks on paper and the read is great.
Last verse was perfect. sand
neat
Not what I usually read but it was pretty interesting. Makes you think. I enjoyed it.
nice poem
thank you for shharing
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