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very well written
you should definitely do a followup with what happens between johnny and anne. it would be cool.
Beautiful story
What a truely beautiful story-you create just the right atmosphere. Thanks!
A bit rushed. Where's the sequel?
You developed a nice atmosphere, I liked the verbal interplay between the 3 characters but I needed more foreplay, if you will, more time to get to know and to care for the characters before they got down and dirty.
The sex part of the story was fine, again a bit rushed. Join my voice to the chorus asking for a sequel involving Johnny and Anne. And take your time with the next one; there's no need to put them straight into the sack.
nice
A story that was both erotic and warm. One of the best favors a guy could want. Well written.
Anne needs some attention too
An excellent short story. I hope to find another where he fucks Anne.
so he got to fuck the girl of his wet dreams at last
and with any luck he got to fuck Anne too.....a nice little tale...
fantacies fulfilled
and a good time was had by all
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